07-29-2023, 07:42 PM 
	
	
	(07-29-2023, 07:04 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Happy TrailsHi Mark,
I dream of casual walks
along the Sugarland trail
with good old Jack
still leading the way.
I carried a walking stick
back then, to clear away
webs weaved across the path
overnight, and to prod
among underbrush, or test
the depth of the creek.
I lost my walking buddy
years back, but this stick
goes everywhere I go now,
and well-meaning people
offer unwanted assistance,
yet they cannot help me
dream of casual walks. all I can say is "wow!"
And I've come to realize
as I've slowed down, the years
somehow sped up.
This is a very effective and affecting poem, and your voice in this one is pristine.
Tim

 

 
