07-28-2023, 07:19 AM
(07-28-2023, 07:12 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:Sharp eye. Good point.(07-28-2023, 06:42 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: potential edit. does this help or hurt?"pencils", "pigment", and "words" are presented without adjectives. Why does "fingers" need one? especially that one
The Artists' Sentence (Potential Edit)
I am convicted
of knowing a Beautiful
that pencils cannot sketch,
pigment cannot paint
and words embarrass themselves
pretending to know;
a sacred scale
these fat fingers
cannot climb--
a flirtatious muse
who would never give it up
to any of us.
that's my 2 cents, or maybe only 1/2 cent.
TqB

