07-28-2023, 06:42 AM
potential edit. does this help or hurt?
The Artists' Sentence (Potential Edit)
I am convicted
of knowing a Beautiful
that pencils cannot sketch,
pigment cannot paint
and words embarrass themselves
pretending to know;
a sacred scale
these fat fingers
cannot climb--
a flirtatious muse
who would never give it up
to any of us.
The Artists' Sentence (Potential Edit)
I am convicted
of knowing a Beautiful
that pencils cannot sketch,
pigment cannot paint
and words embarrass themselves
pretending to know;
a sacred scale
these fat fingers
cannot climb--
a flirtatious muse
who would never give it up
to any of us.
(02-14-2018, 06:42 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: The Artists' Sentence (Overdue Edit)
I am convicted
of knowing a Beautiful
that pencils cannot sketch,
pigment cannot paint
and words embarrass themselves
pretending to know;
a secret chord
my clumsy fingers
cannot strum--
a flirtatious muse
who would never give it up
to any of us.
The Artists' Sentence
I am convicted
of discerning a beauty
pencils cannot sketch
pigment cannot paint
and words embarrass themselves
pretending to know
a flirtatious muse
who would never give it up
to any of us