07-26-2023, 11:50 PM
(07-26-2023, 03:21 AM)Tiger the Lion Wrote: Auntie AudreyHi Tiger,
too much a type
of poor Lot's wife
she got salty
with the paradigms
with that sweet Sodom burning
at her back, her turning
seemed slightly less terrifying
than entering
the kingdom of God
an impostor
Nice one. My only hang up is S1 L4 using 'paradigms' seems out of place and vague. Seems like you could cut that line and it would read the same.
Either way, enjoyed it.
bryn