Hands (ver. 5)

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Alrighty then, Tim-

The expanded version puts more flesh on the bones.
Now just trim some of the fat, but beware the sharp things.
I’d consider ending II with a simple question, like “now what?” I know you have one.
III and IV need some attention, especially those last two lines.

I do like this version more.
Mark

I really don't know what the question was, or why I was doing it.  I recently stopped the habit of studying them, not because I felt like it was a habit or anything, I just didn't need to do it anymore.

I worked on sections III and IV.

Thanks for following along.

Tim