07-24-2023, 09:32 PM
Hey busker-
If you think it needs to be re-written it probably does.
It does seem like there’s more to the story.
You’ve got interesting rhyming to build on.
My 2 cents,
Mark
If you think it needs to be re-written it probably does.
It does seem like there’s more to the story.
You’ve got interesting rhyming to build on.
My 2 cents,
Mark