05-24-2010, 08:28 AM
LOL 
Funny, graphic, I can just imagine it in a little boy's head.
For m there's something off with the last line though... like it's hanging, and not really an ending. Just a minor thought
Funny, graphic, I can just imagine it in a little boy's head.
For m there's something off with the last line though... like it's hanging, and not really an ending. Just a minor thought
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?