07-23-2023, 06:46 AM
Thanks to all of you. I have edited along the lines of what Knot suggested, and most seemed to agree, was the heart (and body) of the poem.
Just for grins, I added a spoiler, a completely different poem, but it is the subject I originally intended to write about. No critique needed, I just wanted to get it out of my system.
TqB
Just for grins, I added a spoiler, a completely different poem, but it is the subject I originally intended to write about. No critique needed, I just wanted to get it out of my system.
TqB