Hands (ver. 5)

Hands (ver. 5)

Knot

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07-22-2023, 07:54 PM

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Hi Tim,
very nice.

I agree with busker, this is the poem

Hands

mechanical marvels
stiff tentacles
full of touch
with nothing in them
but the future.

nothing else is needed (certainly not the repeat of 'hands' in L1)

Best, Knot

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Hands (ver. 5) - by TranquillityBase - 07-22-2023, 06:44 AM

RE: Hands - by brynmawr1 - 07-22-2023, 07:25 AM

RE: Hands - by busker - 07-22-2023, 04:03 PM

RE: Hands - by Knot - 07-22-2023, 07:54 PM

RE: Hands - by alonso ramoran - 07-22-2023, 11:02 PM

RE: Hands - by TranquillityBase - 07-23-2023, 06:46 AM

RE: Hands - by Mark A Becker - 07-23-2023, 09:00 AM

RE: Hands - by TranquillityBase - 07-23-2023, 08:34 PM

RE: Hands - by Mark A Becker - 07-23-2023, 10:53 PM

RE: Hands - by TranquillityBase - 07-24-2023, 09:29 PM

RE: Hands - by Mark A Becker - 07-24-2023, 09:39 PM

RE: Hands - by TranquillityBase - 07-25-2023, 07:55 AM

RE: Hands - by brynmawr1 - 07-25-2023, 10:33 AM

RE: Hands - by TranquillityBase - 07-26-2023, 04:28 AM

RE: Hands (ver. 4) - by brynmawr1 - 07-26-2023, 10:19 PM

RE: Hands (ver. 4) - by Knot - 07-27-2023, 01:17 AM

RE: Hands (ver. 4) - by TranquillityBase - 07-27-2023, 08:10 PM

RE: Hands (ver. 5) - by Knot - 07-27-2023, 10:47 PM

RE: Hands (ver. 5) - by Mark A Becker - 07-29-2023, 02:14 AM

RE: Hands (ver. 5) - by TranquillityBase - 07-29-2023, 04:04 AM

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