07-22-2023, 05:44 AM
Hello duke-
It's been awhile, and I'm glad to read you again.
Not to be a bore, but I'd prefer to see that last line offer a bit more of a twist to the first two. Don't think you need the title, either. Only minor quibbles, though- I'll live
Good to see ya around,
Mark
It's been awhile, and I'm glad to read you again.
Not to be a bore, but I'd prefer to see that last line offer a bit more of a twist to the first two. Don't think you need the title, either. Only minor quibbles, though- I'll live
Good to see ya around,
Mark