Silver Lover

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Silver Lover               when I read this title, I can't help but think of Silver Surfer; blame Rowens; but seriously, I'd prefer a different title

my darling
mirrors do not reflect
the whole truth               the complete truth (?); "the whole truth" is overused

they know nothing
of the beauty
of your youth                repetition of "of" is distracting: "about the beauty" (?)

they show only
fleeting glimpses           like "whole truth", "fleeting glimpses" is too familiar
of your style

they may show some gray
yet not the silver lining
of your smile                      very nice finale

Hi Mark,

A few suggestions.  

Tim