Greetings from the Heat Dome
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I have had many summers without air conditioning, and can relate.

I like the second half a lot, the imagery is solid and I like the idea of someone in sweltering heat daydreaming about someone in frigid cold who is able to make the cold pleasant with their man made heat. In the daydream, the heat is pleasant - which is interesting.
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RE: Greetings from the Heat Dome - by Wjames - 07-18-2023, 03:15 AM
RE: Greetings from the Heat Dome - by brynmawr1 - 07-18-2023, 11:02 AM



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