The Conquering Lion of Judah (new title, rev. 3)
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Thanks Busker, Alonso and Knot.

I've revised it.  I may have over elaborated (not sure I should have added his father's death, but it just came out as I was revising), and I guess I cheated a bit, throwing in that last line from Shakespeare.

Anyway, there it is.

TqB
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RE: The Conquering Lion of Judah - by Knot - 07-08-2023, 12:33 AM
RE: The Conquering Lion of Judah - by busker - 07-08-2023, 06:41 AM
RE: The Conquering Lion of Judah - by Knot - 07-08-2023, 09:35 PM
RE: The Conquering Lion of Judah (new title, rev. 3) - by TranquillityBase - 07-08-2023, 11:30 PM



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