07-05-2023, 04:57 AM
(07-04-2023, 07:30 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote: Poking around I found …. A slightly weak opening. Maybe provide some further context - old album? Physical pics are already an anachronism. Is that a hint as to how long ago it was?
a photo from Disneyland. … possible title / first line in a parallel universe
The background an electric rainbow blur,
their horizontal hair, bodies
curved in motion. Only serendipity … some fine lines. I can see the motion
of light, shutter speed and aperture
could capture, so bright, the eyes
and the smiles; the almost echo
of laughter within
the spin and twirl
of a mother and daughter. … these last four lines are the poem. Beautiful

