07-04-2023, 08:30 AM
(07-04-2023, 07:30 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote: Poking around I foundLovely piece, a still life come alive as the reader reaches the end of the poem.
a photo from Disney.
The background an electric rainbow blur
their hair horizontal, bodies
curved by motion. Only serendipity
of ISO, shutter speed and aperture "ISO" doesn't mean anything to me; "exposure"?
could capture with clarity the eyes
and the smiles; almost an echo
of laughter contained an echo/of laughter almost escapes/in the spin and twirl (?). contained is such a dull word.
in the spin and twirl
of a mother and daughter.
TqB

