Teacup Ride(edit 2)
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(07-04-2023, 07:30 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  Poking around I found
a photo from Disney.
The background an electric rainbow blur
their hair horizontal, bodies
curved by motion.  Only serendipity 
of ISO, shutter speed and aperture           "ISO" doesn't mean anything to me; "exposure"?
could capture with clarity the eyes 
and the smiles; almost an echo
of laughter contained                  an echo/of laughter almost escapes/in the spin and twirl (?). contained is such a dull word.
in the spin and twirl
of a mother and daughter.
Lovely piece, a still life come alive as the reader reaches the end of the poem.
TqB
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Teacup Ride(edit 2) - by brynmawr1 - 07-04-2023, 07:30 AM
RE: Teacup Ride - by TranquillityBase - 07-04-2023, 08:30 AM
RE: Teacup Ride - by brynmawr1 - 07-04-2023, 12:50 PM
RE: Teacup Ride - by Tiger the Lion - 07-04-2023, 11:10 AM
RE: Teacup Ride - by Wjames - 07-04-2023, 01:41 PM
RE: Teacup Ride - by brynmawr1 - 07-04-2023, 10:41 PM
RE: Teacup Ride - by Knot - 07-04-2023, 11:28 PM
RE: Teacup Ride - by brynmawr1 - 07-05-2023, 04:10 AM
RE: Teacup Ride - by Knot - 07-06-2023, 12:03 AM
RE: Teacup Ride - by busker - 07-05-2023, 04:57 AM
RE: Teacup Ride - by brynmawr1 - 07-05-2023, 11:36 PM
RE: Teacup Ride - by Kynaston Levitt - 07-06-2023, 06:35 AM
RE: Teacup Ride(edit) - by brynmawr1 - 07-15-2023, 03:08 AM
RE: Teacup Ride(edit) - by TranquillityBase - 07-15-2023, 08:39 AM
RE: Teacup Ride(edit 2) - by brynmawr1 - 07-28-2023, 08:03 AM
RE: Teacup Ride(edit 2) - by TranquillityBase - 07-28-2023, 08:32 AM
RE: Teacup Ride(edit 2) - by O. M. Geezersnaps - 07-28-2023, 01:15 PM
RE: Teacup Ride(edit 2) - by brynmawr1 - 07-28-2023, 11:34 PM



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