Rain Clock (edit)

[Knot]

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Hi Tim.
I struggle with 'stone pointed minutes' (sends me off to a sundial) and 'psalmody/incarnated' (to a lesser extent) but despite that the whole is very pleasing.

A small thought or two.

Rain Clock ..... anything beter than this? Just to avoid the repetition of 'rain'.


Rain dissolves the hours.
Its relentless fall
washes the day of tyranny
– of stone pointed minutes
and the psalmody
of incarnated seconds
– leaving me time to breathe


Best, Knot


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