06-25-2023, 07:36 AM
Just revisiting my last crit
Ignore what I said
That last line is magical, and the poem beautifully builds up to it
It must necessarily be a flawed masterpiece. It’s the sort of poem that chopping and changing will ruin.
And I lack the fine critiquing skills to point out where a slight alteration in a single word here and there will close the gap.
Ignore what I said
That last line is magical, and the poem beautifully builds up to it
It must necessarily be a flawed masterpiece. It’s the sort of poem that chopping and changing will ruin.
And I lack the fine critiquing skills to point out where a slight alteration in a single word here and there will close the gap.