06-18-2023, 03:07 AM
Cicadas no. 2
Born inside the ancient flow
of skin-tight summer’s
ancient scripture
ancient says a lot, sometimes too much
what's/is there a differnce/ in and inside?
we sing a drill down song,
our invisible longing for light
lost to the mirror of the sun.
It's a game you're here playing with light and sun and in and out
We traverse the strewn net
most nets are strewn
of trees signaling the breeze
to souls below us who wander
listening as our music
there are a lot of verbs here,
I have forgotten what 'adverb' means
traverse the trees
you could leave out souls, below, who, many things you can leave out
and paint a sensual strong picture without concrete details or abstract adjectives
pulls them into the orbit of heat.
Born inside the ancient flow
of skin-tight summer’s
ancient scripture
ancient says a lot, sometimes too much
what's/is there a differnce/ in and inside?
we sing a drill down song,
our invisible longing for light
lost to the mirror of the sun.
It's a game you're here playing with light and sun and in and out
We traverse the strewn net
most nets are strewn
of trees signaling the breeze
to souls below us who wander
listening as our music
there are a lot of verbs here,
I have forgotten what 'adverb' means
traverse the trees
you could leave out souls, below, who, many things you can leave out
and paint a sensual strong picture without concrete details or abstract adjectives
pulls them into the orbit of heat.