Wristwatch (edit3)

Wristwatch (edit3)

Knot

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#16

06-16-2023, 09:32 PM

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Hi Duke.

Like the revision, though not sure it should be one poem. Wristwatch I and Wristwatch II ?

Preferred 'sticky' to 'steely' (the 'tick' of the clock.)

Not sure about 'looped', but no further nits.

Nicely done.

Best, Knot

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Wristwatch (edit3) - by dukealien - 06-11-2023, 08:19 AM

RE: Snagged - by Knot - 06-11-2023, 09:39 PM

RE: Snagged - by dukealien - 06-12-2023, 04:57 AM

RE: Day Watch (edit - title change) - by Tiger the Lion - 06-12-2023, 07:57 AM

RE: Day Watch (edit - title change) - by Knot - 06-12-2023, 08:15 PM

RE: Wristwatch (edit2 - 'nother title change) - by dukealien - 06-13-2023, 04:25 AM

RE: Wristwatch (edit2 - 'nother title change) - by brynmawr1 - 06-13-2023, 04:41 AM

RE: Wristwatch (edit2 - 'nother title change) - by dukealien - 06-13-2023, 05:42 AM

RE: Wristwatch (edit2 - 'nother title change) - by brynmawr1 - 06-13-2023, 06:49 AM

RE: Wristwatch (edit2 - 'nother title change) - by busker - 06-13-2023, 07:50 AM

RE: Wristwatch (edit2 - 'nother title change) - by Knot - 06-13-2023, 09:07 PM

RE: Wristwatch (edit2 - 'nother title change) - by dukealien - 06-14-2023, 06:50 AM

RE: Wristwatch (edit2 - 'nother title change) - by Knot - 06-15-2023, 01:10 AM

RE: Wristwatch (edit2 - 'nother title change) - by rowens - 06-15-2023, 06:33 AM

RE: Wristwatch (edit3) - by dukealien - 06-16-2023, 10:17 AM

RE: Wristwatch (edit3) - by Knot - 06-16-2023, 09:32 PM

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