First and Last Days (A Little Prayer, revised, new title)
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For some reason, I was reminded of Ray's poems on this site. He used to have little pictures and illustrations.
The above would be a nice little picture poem, with a raft theme. Maybe if the poem were shaped like a raft?

It's good, all TqB's poems are good, but maybe a slightly different representation?

Just a suggestion
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RE: A Little Prayer - by busker - 06-14-2023, 07:57 AM
RE: A Little Prayer - by brynmawr1 - 06-14-2023, 10:50 AM
RE: A Little Prayer - by busker - 06-14-2023, 04:52 PM
RE: A Little Prayer - by TranquillityBase - 06-15-2023, 12:44 AM
RE: A Little Prayer - by Knot - 06-14-2023, 11:22 PM
RE: A Little Prayer - by rowens - 06-15-2023, 06:30 AM
RE: A Little Prayer - by TranquillityBase - 06-15-2023, 10:06 PM



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