One-way Ticket (new title) final...

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Thank TqB.  I feel it's close too.  Not sure the title make sense anymore, though.  I proposed a different ending in a reply to rowens.  What do you think?
Thanks for your continued input.
Bryn

I agree the title may need to be revisited (was thinking that yesterday after I wrote my comments).

I think the proposed new ending is more interesting in a way, although it does break your three line stanza pattern.  But I don't think that's a deal killer.