One-way Ticket (new title) final...

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Covers tugged
to my chin, I listen
to birds barter for love.

                      
Covers tugged
to my chin, I listen
to birds barter for love,
 





My feet searching
the chill settle
each for the other.



my feet searching
the chill, settle
each for the other. 



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Though you could keep the . and the My, and see about the , after chill. 

Though leaving the , out, as you have, can create a poetic link between chill, settle and feet. Even searching.