06-07-2023, 10:24 AM
I find the series of brief images very compelling. Especially the dog.
I love the cleverness of each foot settling for the other, an ironic take on the coupling / mating theme.
That's the high point of the poem for me.
I don't think you need to end it with a reference back to the opening. At least in the current form, it doesn't add much to the poem IMO
I love the cleverness of each foot settling for the other, an ironic take on the coupling / mating theme.
That's the high point of the poem for me.
I don't think you need to end it with a reference back to the opening. At least in the current form, it doesn't add much to the poem IMO