Hazel Motes

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Hey TqB,
Another good one.  had to do my research.  My only suggestion(s) would be to make 'truth' the subject of the first line and remove 'I' in the middle and maybe cut 'always'. 
yeah, that's it.  Well, there might be more changes around my suggestions, but I'll leave that to you.
bryn

Hi Bryn,
Thanks for the read and the notes.  I was hoping there was enough on the page to give a complete portrait of Hazel Motes, e.g. without research, so I've got more work to do.
However I don't mind leading folks to Wiseblood.  This is based more on the experience of viewing John Huston's film version of the story though I've read the novel (after I saw the film).
TqB