One-way Ticket (new title) final...

[brynmawr1]

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Hi Bryn.
S3 and S4 work particularly well, not sure about the rest.
Perhaps


Unseasonable


Covers tugged tight
to my chin, I listen
to birds barter for love.

My feet search(ing?) within
the empty chill settle
each for the other.

It’s cold here
in mid-May.
and it shouldn’t be


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Best, Knot


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Hi Knot,
I like the move of S1 to the end.  I feel there isn't enough context without the earlier bits.  Maybe just better writing?
Thanks for commenting
bryn