April Takes a Walk* by brynmawr1
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(06-03-2023, 07:33 AM)Quixilated Wrote:  April Takes a Walk 

An old man walks with a shuffle,
his feet stirring the red-gold rustle
 
of dried leaves.  A low winter sun
casts a shadow, broad and long,
 
almost tickling his grand-daughter
up ahead.  She occasionally looks
 
back to see if he is still there,
but mostly she walks along, unaware 
 
of his smile.  Poking around with a stick
she finds a crocus newly broken through
 
the moist ground.  A purple tongue
getting its first taste of spring.


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The original thread can be found here.
Congratulations Bryn.  Thanks for all the poems and critiques.
TqB
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April Takes a Walk* by brynmawr1 - by Quixilated - 06-03-2023, 07:33 AM
RE: April Takes a Walk* by brynmawr1 - by Wjames - 06-03-2023, 09:16 AM
RE: April Takes a Walk* by brynmawr1 - by TranquillityBase - 06-03-2023, 09:51 PM
RE: April Takes a Walk* by brynmawr1 - by CRNDLSM - 06-05-2023, 03:35 AM
RE: April Takes a Walk* by brynmawr1 - by busker - 06-07-2023, 05:39 PM



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