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06-02-2023, 10:19 PM

(06-02-2023, 10:48 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote: I've gone round and round about whether the first word should be a pronoun or an article. Any thoughts?
Thanks,
bryn

I think an article, "a", would make the poem all that much more enigmatic. My 2 cents.

TqB

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