Ironic Haiku
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You could remove ‘an’ if you want to keep orange. The sun does seem to enjoy trying on every shade from buttercup yellow to lava red, especially if you live in an area where the sky is affected by distant wildfire smoke. My sun has been a very odd shade of reddish orange recently. It wouldn’t seem weird at sunset surrounded by sunset sky, but it was a lava-red sun in the middle of a blue sky afternoon. Anyway, ‘orange’ works for me, and ‘an’ doesn’t seem too vital if you want to extricate a syllable.
The Soufflé isn’t the soufflé; the soufflé is the recipe. --Clara 
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Ironic Haiku - by brynmawr1 - 05-17-2023, 10:11 AM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by Semicircle - 05-17-2023, 11:34 AM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by TranquillityBase - 05-17-2023, 10:02 PM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by Valerie Please - 05-18-2023, 08:53 AM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by brynmawr1 - 05-29-2023, 10:36 PM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by Quixilated - 05-30-2023, 12:48 AM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by brynmawr1 - 05-30-2023, 11:13 AM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by Lynn Mary - 04-11-2025, 07:08 AM



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