holes

[rowens]

Sarah Polley made a movie about this.

I used to think she was older, like Mena Suvari. But she's my age.


I'm not done, so shut up.

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The poem works, all the way through.

The rhymes are sad.

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Rhymes are keeping alive, at least for you.

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The rhymes are keeping someone alive.

And that halfrhyme feels like slime from my mind.


Poetry

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The rhymes are keeping someone alive.

And that halfrhyme feels like slime from my mind.


Poetry

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The rhymes work in this poem.
Rhymes work with the message.