holes

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holes

who am I to wonder why
and wave good bye
or where it is I’m going to?

something feels familiar
about some things I do
but most of all I wonder

who are you?

darling, I’m your man
please sit and hold my hand
I'll do what I can
but you won't remember

who I am

holes big as tomorrow
have begun to open up
the holes of yesterday
all closing down

I will still be here
holding you, my dear
but there will be nobody
that you know around

darling, I’m your man
please sit and hold my hand
I know who you are-
what we did, and I still do-

It's OK to ask me
who are you?

Mark,

Very poignant.  Honestly can't see anything to change.

I was initially (and still am, to some extent) triggered by the "holes", the word I mean.  It didn't seem right for such an enormous topic, if that makes any sense.  But I haven't come up with a satisfying replacement.

Tim

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it's very musical, i mean the rhythms are like a dying fall