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How does this make sense,
feeling guilty for fragility?
Quick to run away from yourself,
a crowd cheers agility.                      the crowd cheers your agility (?)

What is a sentence, what is exile?
Any place you have to stay awhile.
Dancing in a scenery of lessons.
Or maybe a theater of regression.    that's really a theater of regression (?)

I don't want to know I'm your mistake.
Our time was far from fake.
I never was mean, upset, or a flake.   I feel like this line needs reworking, the sentiment made more serious

What ever happened to always being proud,
of the music I write?
Parting ways but rooting each others lives?  not sure how this line relates to the previous line

Transparent boy toy turns invisible, man!           why the comma?
At least he won't try to say hi again.

There's something to like in every stanza of this poem and the poem as a whole reads nicely.