05-20-2023, 12:58 PM 
	
	
	
		Thanks for the words Wjames and galaxitchi
I figured the 'yeah and' made the poem seem more like a confession
but it does seem to be more effective without something to connect to.
Thanks Mark.
	
	
	
I figured the 'yeah and' made the poem seem more like a confession
but it does seem to be more effective without something to connect to.
Thanks Mark.

 

 
