Lorem Ipsum
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Thanks for the words Wjames and galaxitchi


I figured the 'yeah and' made the poem seem more like a confession

but it does seem to be more effective without something to connect to.

Thanks Mark.
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Lorem Ipsum - by Semicircle - 05-18-2023, 06:41 AM
RE: Lorem Ipsum - by Wjames - 05-18-2023, 09:29 AM
RE: Lorem Ipsum - by galaxitchi - 05-19-2023, 02:04 AM
RE: Lorem Ipsum - by Mark A Becker - 05-20-2023, 03:38 AM
RE: Lorem Ipsum - by Semicircle - 05-20-2023, 12:58 PM



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