05-17-2023, 10:07 PM
(05-17-2023, 04:49 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote: Hey Tim-Yes, this one is prosaic. It may be this just has to remain a happy memory and not a poem.
Not to be too crabby, but this reads more like a journal entry than a poem.
I know that you have the chops to inject this with some of that original TqB life.
Ginsberg would appreciate that...
Mark
I went home after the reading and stayed up all night writing poetry by candlelight. Maybe that should be the poem.

