Allen Ginsberg, 1973
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(05-17-2023, 04:49 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  Hey Tim-

Not to be too crabby, but this reads more like a journal entry than a poem.
I know that you have the chops to inject this with some of that original TqB life.
Ginsberg would appreciate that...

Mark
Yes, this one is prosaic.  It may be this just has to remain a happy memory and not a poem.

I went home after the reading and stayed up all night writing poetry by candlelight.  Maybe that should be the poem.
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Allen Ginsberg, 1973 - by TranquillityBase - 05-13-2023, 11:46 PM
RE: Allen Ginsberg, 1973 - by Tiger the Lion - 05-14-2023, 01:36 AM
RE: Allen Ginsberg, 1973 - by TranquillityBase - 05-14-2023, 09:57 PM
RE: Allen Ginsberg, 1973 - by brynmawr1 - 05-15-2023, 05:32 AM
RE: Allen Ginsberg, 1973 - by TranquillityBase - 05-15-2023, 06:25 AM
RE: Allen Ginsberg, 1973 - by brynmawr1 - 05-15-2023, 06:31 AM
RE: Allen Ginsberg, 1973 - by Poetry In Motion - 05-15-2023, 01:41 PM
RE: Allen Ginsberg, 1973 - by busker - 05-16-2023, 09:14 AM
RE: Allen Ginsberg, 1973 - by Mark A Becker - 05-17-2023, 04:49 AM
RE: Allen Ginsberg, 1973 - by TranquillityBase - 05-17-2023, 10:07 PM
RE: Allen Ginsberg, 1973 - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 06:49 AM



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