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Ironic Haiku
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05-17-2023, 10:02 PM
(05-17-2023, 10:11 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote: A blue flower's bloomDoesn't "orange" add one syllable too many? Also, I've just never seen an orange sun, except maybe at dawn or sunset. What about "dry summer sun". That would lead into "waiting for the rain"? Otherwise, I'd change last line, adding maybe another color. TqB |
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Ironic Haiku - by brynmawr1 - 05-17-2023, 10:11 AM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by Semicircle - 05-17-2023, 11:34 AM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by TranquillityBase - 05-17-2023, 10:02 PM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by Valerie Please - 05-18-2023, 08:53 AM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by brynmawr1 - 05-29-2023, 10:36 PM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by Quixilated - 05-30-2023, 12:48 AM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by brynmawr1 - 05-30-2023, 11:13 AM
RE: Ironic Haiku - by Lynn Mary - 04-11-2025, 07:08 AM
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