In the desert
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Hi busker-

In the desert

At night, the days
return, like waves interestingly quizical opening
on the sea  'on the sea of Time' seems a bit worn
of Time, friendless companion. the poem seems to be built on the two bolded rhymes, and they're good ones.

At night, you are
close to me. Immutable,
like a cycling star -  not sure 'cycling' is the right word
a cloud to cloud   really good from here to the end
and grave to grave
eternity,
my endless companion
.
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Messages In This Thread
In the desert - by busker - 05-10-2023, 09:47 PM
RE: In the desert - by CRNDLSM - 05-10-2023, 11:57 PM
RE: In the desert - by TranquillityBase - 05-11-2023, 12:51 AM
RE: In the desert - by dukealien - 05-11-2023, 05:48 AM
RE: In the desert - by busker - 05-11-2023, 08:30 AM
RE: In the desert - by Mark A Becker - 05-17-2023, 04:56 AM
RE: In the desert - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 12:22 PM



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