Did I say sorry?(edit)
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Like this piece alot, I feel like it's pretty matter of fact.
When I read it aloud it's a little monotone not sure if that was intentional. Though I feel like it's the result and critique of writing
A poem that serves and a emotional vent.

Great idea! Thanks for the read
Only one thing is impossible for God: To find any sense in any copyright law on the planet.
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Did I say sorry?(edit) - by brynmawr1 - 05-08-2023, 07:42 AM
RE: Did I say sorry? - by TranquillityBase - 05-08-2023, 10:12 PM
RE: Did I say sorry? - by brynmawr1 - 05-09-2023, 03:25 AM
RE: Did I say sorry?(edit) - by TranquillityBase - 05-11-2023, 01:18 AM
RE: Did I say sorry?(edit) - by brynmawr1 - 05-11-2023, 02:08 AM
RE: Did I say sorry?(edit) - by TranquillityBase - 05-11-2023, 02:38 AM
RE: Did I say sorry?(edit) - by Bunx - 05-14-2023, 03:43 AM



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