05-11-2023, 08:30 AM
Thanks, folks
I see that it’s become more cryptic than I intended
The cycling star and clouds, in particular - it was intended to be a reference to star clouds and supernovae leading back to them, from the grave of one to another
The identity of the endless companion shouldn’t be hard to guess in that context,, particularly in the spiritual desert of the modern world, but the reference to Time may be muddying matters somewhat.
Overall, it hasn’t quite succeeded in its intent
I see that it’s become more cryptic than I intended
The cycling star and clouds, in particular - it was intended to be a reference to star clouds and supernovae leading back to them, from the grave of one to another
The identity of the endless companion shouldn’t be hard to guess in that context,, particularly in the spiritual desert of the modern world, but the reference to Time may be muddying matters somewhat.
Overall, it hasn’t quite succeeded in its intent

