In the desert
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(05-10-2023, 09:47 PM)busker Wrote:  In the desert

At night, the days
return, like waves 
on the sea
of Time, friendless companion.

At night, you are
close to me. Immutable,
like a cycling star -
a cloud to cloud
and grave to grave
eternity,
my endless companion.            My favorite lines.
I have trouble with "cycling star", mainly the word "cycling" as I'm not sure what kind of cycle you are referencing (and I also keep seeing Lance Armstrong).  I like the build up in each stanza and the ending.  
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In the desert - by busker - 05-10-2023, 09:47 PM
RE: In the desert - by CRNDLSM - 05-10-2023, 11:57 PM
RE: In the desert - by TranquillityBase - 05-11-2023, 12:51 AM
RE: In the desert - by dukealien - 05-11-2023, 05:48 AM
RE: In the desert - by busker - 05-11-2023, 08:30 AM
RE: In the desert - by Mark A Becker - 05-17-2023, 04:56 AM
RE: In the desert - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 12:22 PM



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