05-11-2023, 12:51 AM
(05-10-2023, 09:47 PM)busker Wrote: In the desertI have trouble with "cycling star", mainly the word "cycling" as I'm not sure what kind of cycle you are referencing (and I also keep seeing Lance Armstrong). I like the build up in each stanza and the ending.
At night, the days
return, like waves
on the sea
of Time, friendless companion.
At night, you are
close to me. Immutable,
like a cycling star -
a cloud to cloud
and grave to grave
eternity,
my endless companion. My favorite lines.

