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In the desert
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05-10-2023, 11:57 PM
I like 'cycling star' and the friendless/endless companion. I think your biggest issue here is the combo 'like waves on the sea' and 'sea of Time'. I don't quite get the cloud to grave jump either. Look forward to seeing where you go with this
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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In the desert - by busker - 05-10-2023, 09:47 PM
RE: In the desert - by CRNDLSM - 05-10-2023, 11:57 PM
RE: In the desert - by TranquillityBase - 05-11-2023, 12:51 AM
RE: In the desert - by dukealien - 05-11-2023, 05:48 AM
RE: In the desert - by busker - 05-11-2023, 08:30 AM
RE: In the desert - by Mark A Becker - 05-17-2023, 04:56 AM
RE: In the desert - by rowens - 05-18-2023, 12:22 PM
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