Time Piece
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(05-06-2023, 07:37 AM)TranquillityBase Wrote:  
(05-06-2023, 07:13 AM)brynmawr1 Wrote:  I think it reads well.  Are you happy with it?

Rowen's got me listening to Tom Waits.  Kind of gets me in the writing mood.
For such that it is, I'm happy with it.  It a slight thing.

Are you new to Tom Waits?  I went thorugh a Tom Waits phase, listened to him incessantly.  If you haven't heard it, listen to the Brawlers CD of Orphans.
Tis with all creation, I think.  I'm sure God has his regrets.  'God's Regrets' would make a great title to some poem, or a punk band.
I had a roommate in the nineties that loved him.  Liked him, but didn't appreciate him at the time.  Will look up your suggestion.
Always a pleasure.
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Messages In This Thread
Time Piece - by TranquillityBase - 05-03-2023, 02:40 AM
RE: Time Piece - by rowens - 05-03-2023, 04:40 PM
RE: Time Piece - by TranquillityBase - 05-04-2023, 02:05 AM
RE: Time Piece - by brynmawr1 - 05-04-2023, 02:23 AM
RE: Time Piece - by TranquillityBase - 05-04-2023, 02:34 AM
RE: Time Piece - by brynmawr1 - 05-05-2023, 06:36 AM
RE: Time Piece - by TranquillityBase - 05-05-2023, 07:30 AM
RE: Time Piece - by brynmawr1 - 05-06-2023, 07:13 AM
RE: Time Piece - by TranquillityBase - 05-06-2023, 07:37 AM
RE: Time Piece - by brynmawr1 - 05-06-2023, 10:19 AM



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