Self Study

[rowens]

This expression is good. Everything you say. The free-style is great. The poem is judged on Difference. 
If you write good like lots do, the poetry is diminished. Poetry is Elite, for Elites.
If you don't care about that, this is great.
The complexity of the Poetry Machine cancels out even the great when it's common.




We are more than the summation
of rules and regulations
Expectations
beyond prayers to deliver
With her

This is a demon stration: 
You could move the word Expectations from where you have it
to under With her


she gives altercations
of jubilation


She altercates
jubilate
digits past
grasped

backpack like that


digits grasped
past
correlation of adulation
when we congress
Digress the excess
holy hums
ta
cit quivers
divine perspiration
spirit distillation
A configuration
of humanity
spirituality
eth
ereal delirium
comfortable insanity
imperial madness
Past this

You get the picture.

This is yours, not mine. 


all consuming
eluding veil
of the frail
Confer in dens
look past the lens
set your mind
free from
Rules and regulations
expectation
Find jubilation
in your darkest incarnations
That is your summation

Do you lay when you fall
or answer the call?