Time Piece

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Words.
Without them.
12:30,

free,
out past the flowers.


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Ignore me, TqBse, 
or go from there.
Your poem meant something. I want everything to mean something else.
Something unigueslashstrange

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Words

Without them,
12:30,

free,
out past the flowers,
something

strange
.

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Should there be a comma after 12:30?


All the stuff you can do with minor detail arrangements.

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Words
or
without
, 12:30

past the flowers.

Something

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Your poem as it is works.

But I don't know that.

I want to play.

It’s 12:30
and I’m empty
To be without
is to be

The words

. . . 



Games in my heart at 4am.

Thanks Rowens.

I was expecting something.....I don't know.....something else.  Anyway, those games in your heart led me to do some edits.  Though I seem to have forgotten how to hide the previous versions.  Too scattered to look it up now.

I'm glad it meant something to you.

TqB