05-03-2023, 04:40 PM
Words.
Without them.
12:30,
free,
out past the flowers.
....................................
Ignore me, TqBse,
or go from there.
Your poem meant something. I want everything to mean something else.
Something unigueslashstrange
Words
Without them,
12:30,
free,
out past the flowers,
something
strange
.
Should there be a comma after 12:30?
All the stuff you can do with minor detail arrangements.
Words
or
without
, 12:30
past the flowers.
Something
Your poem as it is works.
But I don't know that.
I want to play.
It’s 12:30
and I’m empty
To be without
is to be
The words
. . .
Games in my heart at 4am.
Without them.
12:30,
free,
out past the flowers.
....................................
Ignore me, TqBse,
or go from there.
Your poem meant something. I want everything to mean something else.
Something unigueslashstrange
Words
Without them,
12:30,
free,
out past the flowers,
something
strange
.
Should there be a comma after 12:30?
All the stuff you can do with minor detail arrangements.
Words
or
without
, 12:30
past the flowers.
Something
Your poem as it is works.
But I don't know that.
I want to play.
It’s 12:30
and I’m empty
To be without
is to be
The words
. . .
Games in my heart at 4am.