Scatter

[rowens]

Scatter

I ran to scatter the birds today,

I ran and scattered the birds today

That would be a unique line

needing a direction to release energy.

I needed direction

The freedom of flight 

and from there you can make a poem.

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I ran and scattered birds today,
needing direction . . .

Or better yet:


I scattered birds today,
needing direction . . .

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Scattering wings
today,

needing direction,

I felt freedom.
Until

free      birds
showed me

freedom

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Sorry, I don't know how to do this anymore.

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Oh.


Scattering feathers
today,

needing direction, 

I felt freedom.

Until

wings 

showed me            freedom

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You are going too thick.

The poem starts with the first line and ends with the last line. But you are not doing poetry between.