2023 NaPM 25 April
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(04-25-2023, 02:35 AM)Mark A Becker Wrote:  I did not say much

I did not say much
the last time
that I would see you,
in Florida.

We stood quietly
then, on the shore
of the Gulf, and watched
the sun set.

But I want you to know
Dad, that I do visit
from time to time
now,

to talk,
to the wind.
Hey Mark, this is a real heart breaker of a poem.  So spare but so poignant.

I skimmed through most of NaPM, re-reading a lot, in trying to think about whose poem or work to address.  I just want to say it's pretty effing impressive to be with you folks, with special kudos for some I haven't encountered before (as much) like WJ James and Quix.  Though there've been times I wanted to give up, it's a charge to be in your company.  I could have written about any of a dozen more that have shown up in our group.

Anyway, big squeal from a little pig.
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Messages In This Thread
2023 NaPM 25 April - by RiverNotch - 04-24-2023, 09:05 PM
RE: 2023 NaPM 25 April - by Mark A Becker - 04-25-2023, 02:35 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 25 April - by TranquillityBase - 04-26-2023, 03:44 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 25 April - by TranquillityBase - 04-25-2023, 03:06 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 25 April - by Mark A Becker - 04-25-2023, 06:33 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 25 April - by dukealien - 04-25-2023, 09:56 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 25 April - by CRNDLSM - 04-26-2023, 05:42 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 25 April - by busker - 04-26-2023, 11:39 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 25 April - by RiverNotch - 04-26-2023, 10:09 PM
RE: 2023 NaPM 25 April - by Mark A Becker - 04-30-2023, 05:01 AM
RE: 2023 NaPM 25 April - by Wjames - 04-30-2023, 02:00 AM



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