Memento
#10
Hey again Tim-

Yeah, my back bones are lousy traitors.

As regards your poem, I would worry less about line lengths, and more about conveying your intent.
This reader is fine with line length variations.

You have a splendid poem going, so be very careful with this one. It’s damn near perfect.

Thanks for your concern about my breakage, but at our age the warranties just start running out.
I’m always looking forward to the next day, even with the ‘equipment’ I gotta use now.
Mark
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Memento - by TranquillityBase - 03-22-2023, 11:02 PM
RE: Memento - by Mark A Becker - 03-23-2023, 01:51 AM
RE: Memento - by TranquillityBase - 03-24-2023, 05:58 AM
RE: Memento - by Mark A Becker - 03-24-2023, 07:06 AM
RE: Memento - by TranquillityBase - 03-25-2023, 01:40 AM
RE: Memento - by alonso ramoran - 03-25-2023, 02:12 AM
RE: Memento - by TranquillityBase - 03-25-2023, 06:32 AM
RE: Memento - by Mark A Becker - 03-25-2023, 10:46 PM
RE: Memento - by TranquillityBase - 03-27-2023, 07:58 AM
RE: Memento - by Mark A Becker - 03-27-2023, 10:29 AM
RE: Memento - by brynmawr1 - 03-28-2023, 11:52 AM
RE: Memento - by TranquillityBase - 03-30-2023, 10:31 AM
RE: Memento - by alonso ramoran - 03-30-2023, 04:13 AM
RE: Memento - by Mark A Becker - 03-30-2023, 11:11 AM
RE: Memento - by brynmawr1 - 03-30-2023, 11:50 AM
RE: Memento - by TranquillityBase - 03-31-2023, 01:35 AM
RE: Memento - by alonso ramoran - 03-30-2023, 02:27 PM
RE: Memento - by Mark A Becker - 03-30-2023, 11:52 PM
RE: Memento - by Mark A Becker - 03-31-2023, 10:00 PM
RE: Memento - by TranquillityBase - 04-01-2023, 12:51 AM
RE: Memento - by Mark A Becker - 04-01-2023, 04:12 AM
RE: Memento - by Mark A Becker - 04-02-2023, 02:40 AM
RE: Memento - by Mark A Becker - 04-25-2023, 10:51 PM



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