Geese
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I live in a fly zone. Canada geese come and go by the thousands. They are intelligent creatures, driven by base instinct. I sense you are making some kind of connection to instinct here.

Even as the migration of geese is somewhat connected to history, the repetition of history is doomed to repeat. In violence. In the sheer folly of Man. I even see some Biblical connections in this poem. At least in my mind.

Keep working on it. Keep connecting those dots.
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Messages In This Thread
Geese - by Miley - 03-16-2023, 05:53 PM
RE: Geese - by Mark A Becker - 03-17-2023, 07:20 AM
RE: Geese - by Miley - 03-17-2023, 06:50 PM
RE: Geese - by Mark A Becker - 03-17-2023, 11:22 PM
RE: Geese - by TranquillityBase - 03-17-2023, 11:53 PM
RE: Geese - by TranquillityBase - 03-18-2023, 02:11 AM
RE: Geese - by alonso ramoran - 03-19-2023, 05:41 AM
RE: Geese - by 71degrees - 03-20-2023, 11:53 PM
RE: Geese - by Wjames - 05-07-2023, 04:46 AM
RE: Geese - by Miley - 06-26-2023, 12:54 PM
RE: Geese - by Knot - 06-26-2023, 10:10 PM
RE: Geese - by Miley - 06-26-2023, 10:53 PM



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