03-18-2023, 04:03 AM
Way to go Steve!
I love this little poem.
I too circle back to many of my old poems, usually to make only minor changes.
I did that most recently with one I reposted in MISC, called The Whore’s Prayer
ps. Now that I'm retired I don't have a job to interfere with my work. Too bad I couldn't pay the mortagage with this kind of work, or I'd have done it full time. What the hay, at least I loved what I used to do for the dollars. Tuning up for NaPoMo, and hope to be able to save two or three outta those thirty. That's if I can even make it through that gauntlet.
From another discussion, this is a really good example of how telling and showing work together.
I love this little poem.
I too circle back to many of my old poems, usually to make only minor changes.
I did that most recently with one I reposted in MISC, called The Whore’s Prayer
ps. Now that I'm retired I don't have a job to interfere with my work. Too bad I couldn't pay the mortagage with this kind of work, or I'd have done it full time. What the hay, at least I loved what I used to do for the dollars. Tuning up for NaPoMo, and hope to be able to save two or three outta those thirty. That's if I can even make it through that gauntlet.
From another discussion, this is a really good example of how telling and showing work together.