03-17-2023, 06:50 PM
Thank you for the reply Mark, I appreciate it.
I get the sense my poem is opaque, and that the format/enjambment isn't helping. I made an edit, maybe a little too quiclyk haha, but I made an edit, and I tried to connect the dots a little for my readers. I'm sure its not there yet, but its on its way... thanks
I've always managed to somehow make the whole thing double-spaced, this isn't intentional! Though it dosn't look awful.
I get the sense my poem is opaque, and that the format/enjambment isn't helping. I made an edit, maybe a little too quiclyk haha, but I made an edit, and I tried to connect the dots a little for my readers. I'm sure its not there yet, but its on its way... thanks
I've always managed to somehow make the whole thing double-spaced, this isn't intentional! Though it dosn't look awful.