03-17-2023, 07:20 AM
Hi Miley-
I'm not sure how to approach this one. The first three lines seem to be a poem all on their own, about geese.
The lines after that lose me- I'm sure they make sense in your head, but I find them difficult to follow.
...Mark
I'm not sure how to approach this one. The first three lines seem to be a poem all on their own, about geese.
The lines after that lose me- I'm sure they make sense in your head, but I find them difficult to follow.
(03-16-2023, 05:53 PM)Miley Wrote: “I am fire and air; my other elementsI need a much better sense of the place that you are talking about, and some imagery would help me out.
I give to baser life”
– Cleopatra, "Antony and Cleopatra" (scene ii), by William Shakespeare
Descend
in perfect pitch
of pale plumes and snowfall a nice little poem in these first lines
at last horizon’s lost not at all sure what 'at last horizon's' means, unless I read it as 'at last horizon has lost all meaning' - but that still is very unclear to me
all meaning this isn’t a noble place
but sometimes the river freezes over in gold the bolded phrase is beautiful
like god is an artery hard for me to picture this metaphor
cut through our centre and still
people work here like everywhere everyday
like geese it’s true I'm confused by the bolded part
our history is the history of falling I need a better sense of place here
and violence
and love everywhere the earth screamed so loud
it lost its voice again and again the bolded phrase is interesting, but I don't know what the earth is screamimg about.
I give to baser life 'give' or 'give in' ??
...Mark

